{"id":191,"date":"2009-04-08T02:07:43","date_gmt":"2009-04-08T09:07:43","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/cars.zimbly.com\/?p=191"},"modified":"2009-04-08T02:07:43","modified_gmt":"2009-04-08T09:07:43","slug":"tata-xenon-copy-editing-fail","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.sftwrfctry.com\/sftwrfctry\/cars\/2009\/04\/08\/tata-xenon-copy-editing-fail\/","title":{"rendered":"Tata Xenon Copy Editing Fail"},"content":{"rendered":"

I went to the Tata Xenon Site<\/a> today after seeing an ad on one of the automotive websites I frequent. I was just telling someone that the Xenon would be a hell of a sight with a roll bar, wide tires and whole bank of heavy duty rally type lamps on the roof and of course a high lift kit – just the thing scare a lot of cabbies\/autos\/bikers out of the way :-).  However looking at the site I may have to revise my opinion of the vehicle of being an “All Terrain  Conqueror” – the copy makes me think it is not a conqueror<\/strong> but a conquest<\/strong>. Click on the image to see the “fail”.<\/p>\n

\"Tata<\/a>
Tata Xenon Copy Editing Fail<\/figcaption><\/figure>\n

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Dear Tata Motors,<\/p>\n

       I tried to contact you with this but this resulted in another page that didnt work – another “fail”. Here is a screenshot of my attempt (I blanked out my email). FYI – The submit button doesnt show up on your site. Finally I still filled out a lot of info I didnt want to and then submitted. Hope someone reads it. Click on the image to see a larger version.<\/p>\n

\"Tata<\/a>
Tata Xenon Fail 2<\/figcaption><\/figure>\n

Regards,<\/p>\n

Sushil<\/p>\n

 <\/p>\n

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